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Spanking story extract

by suzeemoon @ Tuesday, 22. Apr, 2008 - 22:08:15

This is story I am currently working on - Should finish it soon. This is an early part of the story.

Terror at the thought of her unpunished flesh being beaten meant the lecture was received in a daze. Suzannah, once again pacing furiously, recalled some comments on duty, discipline and justice and she remembered how she had found herself focussed on the horror of his decree. She had found herself blushing as he had told the maid she would place herself in front of her master and have her flesh bared for a spanking.

At his command, the girl had silently turned a chair towards her master and bent with back to him, displaying her modestly covered back and now readily-curved bottom, as she held onto the sides to the chair. Suzannah had realised the girl’s practiced acquiesce revealed a history of such spankings at her husband’s hand, but her thoughts had been interrupted by the repetition of her name on his lips, once more:

‘My Lady. Please prepare the girl for her chastisement. I want her skirts raised. Her carelessness and thoughtlessness does not, however, merit less than punishment on her bare flesh. You will also lower her undergarments.’

As Suzannah recalled the shameful incident of her first experience of aiding another woman with her clothing the pacing once again faltered. Her ladyship was also remembering that further flicker of awe and horrified excitement she felt as she clumsily, and with unpractised hand raised the girl’s skirts. Once again, her kindly husband and guardian became the powerful authoritarian she had seen on that fateful day she had first witnessed him chastising the maid. She had struggled with the weight and volume of the girl’s skirts and petticoats and pushed them up and over her back, leaving the long, thin drawers as the girl’s only covering and realised that this was a temporary protection only.

‘Now, Suzannah, I require the girl’s drawers to be lowered’

The sound of such vulgarity on her husband’s lips was as shocking to Suzannah as the act she was required to perform – never had her very proper husband ever named a female undergarment, let alone issue orders around it. Despite her shock, fear and hesitation, she felt a strange mixture of gratitude and revulsion as her husband guided her through her task. The less delicate language remained shocking as were his expectations, but somehow, the explicit instructions allowed the modest young wife to comply:
‘You will unbutton her drawers and loosen the drawstring’

Suzannah had only later realised her husband’s detailed knowledge and familiarity with such garments. He had, after all, never loosened her garments – a task for her maid or occasionally, herself only. She had realised with further blushes that his passion for a disciplined household had provided him with an unusual knowledge of his serving maids’ underpinnings.
As Lady Suzannah’s nervous and unpractised fingers struggled with the buttons and strings, she heard her next set of instructions, once more shocked at Lord strap’s earthy and shocking vocabulary:

‘The drawers must be lowered to reveal the whole of her naughty, disobedient bottom. I particularly require access to her lower regions, where I intend to make her flesh sing. By pulling the drawstring, Suzannah, you may tie off her drawers below this area to leave her bottom bare for my attentions, but provide her with some undeserved modesty as I do not intend slapping her thighs for this particular infringement….That’s right…Just there…Just pull the strings, Suzannah and tie them together.’

As she had complied in a shocked daze, worse was to follow:


 
 

Writing spanking stuff

by suzeemoon @ Tuesday, 22. Apr, 2008 - 21:59:07

I haven't! Not really and not for ages anyway. I've written lots in the past, but being mostly unpublished is frustrating. I am going to self-publish a book of spanking stories soon and done the editing and prep.

I thought it would be a good idea to write some stuff, just to get my hand back in (so to speak!) I have several stories on the go that have not been touched in so long, I forgot where I was with them. I used to write one story at a time, (did two books' worth this way)but then started writing down stuff so I wouldn't forget. Some are just titles to act as triggers. Some are a few paras and some half-written. I checked on one and it was merely a title (I said it's been a while!), another I knew I'd started was actually nearly 9,000 words.

It's vaguely Victorian, but underwear is based on fond memories of Western saloon girls in films seen on TV and my fantasy of Victorian dress. All very corny - She is about to be punished by her husband for risking her safety and is thinking back over recent limited experience of corporal punishment of the maid and herself by him. I loved rereading it and wrote a few hundred words - I'd left it mid-caning!88| Caning is now over and she's distraught, but he is having lascivious thoughts and I'm not sure whether she's going to get a cuddle before she gets the Victorian equivalent of a good bonking which they will both enjoy :>>

I shall post an extract...

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